Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Loses Mom |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
All through the years, Bones was always aware, that when he was around Mom, very often she would be just watching, and even staring at him. When she was ready to die, Bones was at her side. Mom took Bones face in her hands, looked him in the eye, and said “You’re a beautiful man.” Bones said thanks, started to cry, and left the room. He knew Mom was an expert on such things. Bobby |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very tender |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear 1slick_lady, That means a great deal to me. I'm happy that you found tenderness in the scene. Love Bobby |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It takes a real man to know how to cry. God blesses Bones. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Sunshine, For your very kind words on Bones. Love Bones/Bobby |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
My Dear Bobby, If you didn't get a hug then you are getting one now. never be ashamed to show how you feel, it means so much to those who love you. Love 'un stuff, Billie C. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Billie C., Bones always was the emotional type. Thanks for the nice hug Hon. Love Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
It is soft, true and lovely clever talks delay friendship! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm very pleased that you liked the poem. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Poddarku, I'm happy that you found the poem to be "soft, true and lovely". Thanks for the kind words. Bobby |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes, very tender indeed. I also give Bones a hug. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear WindWalker, I'm happy that you found the poem to be tender. Thanks for the hug. Love Bones |
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