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Open Poetry #44

I Wish

SoftSoul94
New Member

since 2009-05-20

Posts 5

0 posted 2009-06-01 12:49 PM

My second poem, hope you like it

Oh, how I wish to fly.
High, high, above the sky.
Gliding quick trough the air,
like an aeroplane.
Why should you even care,
you all think I'm insane.
But oh, how I wish to fly.
High, high, above the sky.

Oh, how I wish to run.
Out, out, in the burning sun.
Runnning free and wild,
like a jaguar.
I'm dreaming like a child,
letting my thoughts go far.
But oh, how I wish to run.
Out, out, in the burning sun.

Oh, how I love to dream.
Yay, yay, that's what I scream.
Having a lot of fun,
letting thoughts go free.
Just telling everyone,
that this is really me.
But oh, how I love to dream.
Yay, yay, that's what I scream.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2009-06-01 04:05 PM

And it begs the question why we even bother asking for freedom when it's right there for the taking.

Well done.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-06-02 12:57 PM

I wish, as you wish!

"I'm dreaming like a child,
letting my thoughts go far."

What a delightful poem!

Greetings, SoftSoul. What a gentle user name.

Welcome to piptalk!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-06-02 10:31 PM

Yo dear SoftSoul94,

Screaming "Yay yay" will get you places. That's a great way to be.

Love Bobby

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