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Bloodline
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0 posted 2009-05-28 09:51 PM





They feared the power of Tesla’s coil,
Defamed him to steal his wondrous gift.
The same mindset is shocking the skies
Blind to damages of their Babel shrift.
So to the North we see this science toil
And overhead it’s spectre on us spies.

They lied. Twas for the common good,
To help unlock the Universal mystery,
Save us from ourselves, better our lives!
With a two-face Dragon tongue we see
The beast arise praying in mitre hood.
“Bless the children”, but no one survives!

The atmosphere, ionosphere and in-between
Is just an experiment for Man to dream,
To reach his full potential he must brave
The unknown. Never let consequences seem
As a threshold to withdraw. The factor gene,
Remember, is only a pattern, not a cave!

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2009-05-29 01:38 AM


Woo, really liked this!
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-05-29 07:12 AM


enjoyed the view BL!
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2009-05-29 09:00 AM


I spent many hours 'neath those rainbow dancing lights while living in Alaska.
Your poem is as brilliant as those lights.

Osprey
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4 posted 2009-05-29 09:08 AM


Ticks in all departments for this fine poem.
Bloodline
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5 posted 2009-05-29 09:39 AM


Kaoru, your Woo is cool, thanks,

Dark Stranger, appreciate the read,

Midnitesun, oh would love to see
that country with my own eyes, thank you,

Osprey, that's the best tick to have,
many thanks,


Margherita
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6 posted 2009-05-29 12:34 PM


I have to echo Kacy's reply, this is truly brilliant!

If only we would invest more in unveiling the yet unknown.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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7 posted 2009-05-30 04:55 AM


Hello Bloodline, enjoyed very much the poem and have physics memories when I was student, I definitely prefer poetry than physics...Thanks for the very well crafted poem..

yann

Bloodline
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8 posted 2009-05-30 11:32 AM


Margherita, thank you for those nice words,

2islander2, and thank you for the read
and lesson,

Bloodline

Heart2Heart
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9 posted 2009-05-30 11:56 AM


Bloodline, such an intriguing, brilliant and intense poem.... a most impressive write.
Heart2Heart

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-05-30 12:23 PM


Yo Bloodline,

I'm afraid this is way beyond my scope of understanding.

Bobby

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11 posted 2009-05-30 12:41 PM


The factor gene,
Remember, is only a pattern, not a cave!

LOL~ loved this line....

DNA...

~ARH

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12 posted 2009-05-30 03:28 PM


Very sharp.

H

Bloodline
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13 posted 2009-05-31 09:10 AM


Heart2Heart, well thank you for those
kind words,


Robert E. Jordan, oh just a human view,
thanks for the read,


A Romantic Heart, yes, we need to
widen our senses for sure, many thanks,

unboundpoetess, thank you that point of view,

Bloodline


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