Open Poetry #44 |
Strange Haarp |
Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
They feared the power of Tesla’s coil, Defamed him to steal his wondrous gift. The same mindset is shocking the skies Blind to damages of their Babel shrift. So to the North we see this science toil And overhead it’s spectre on us spies. They lied. Twas for the common good, To help unlock the Universal mystery, Save us from ourselves, better our lives! With a two-face Dragon tongue we see The beast arise praying in mitre hood. “Bless the children”, but no one survives! The atmosphere, ionosphere and in-between Is just an experiment for Man to dream, To reach his full potential he must brave The unknown. Never let consequences seem As a threshold to withdraw. The factor gene, Remember, is only a pattern, not a cave! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Woo, really liked this! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed the view BL! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I spent many hours 'neath those rainbow dancing lights while living in Alaska. Your poem is as brilliant as those lights. |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Ticks in all departments for this fine poem. |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Kaoru, your Woo is cool, thanks, Dark Stranger, appreciate the read, Midnitesun, oh would love to see that country with my own eyes, thank you, Osprey, that's the best tick to have, many thanks, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I have to echo Kacy's reply, this is truly brilliant! If only we would invest more in unveiling the yet unknown. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bloodline, enjoyed very much the poem and have physics memories when I was student, I definitely prefer poetry than physics...Thanks for the very well crafted poem.. yann |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Margherita, thank you for those nice words, 2islander2, and thank you for the read and lesson, Bloodline |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Bloodline, such an intriguing, brilliant and intense poem.... a most impressive write. Heart2Heart |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bloodline, I'm afraid this is way beyond my scope of understanding. Bobby |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
The factor gene, Remember, is only a pattern, not a cave! LOL~ loved this line.... DNA... ~ARH |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Very sharp. H |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Heart2Heart, well thank you for those kind words, Robert E. Jordan, oh just a human view, thanks for the read, A Romantic Heart, yes, we need to widen our senses for sure, many thanks, unboundpoetess, thank you that point of view, Bloodline |
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