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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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0 posted 2009-01-13 08:57 PM

razor trek

the razor doesn’t like my face either

but she has to kiss me
something the mirror avoids

or maybe she’s a tramp
who'd rather nibble me all over

maybe this warm comfortable buzz
isn’t her tiny motor after all

maybe she lusts to boldly go
where no razor has gone before

no one’s watching but the mirror

let’s find out

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2009-01-13 11:33 PM

Ratleader - h'mmmm, I like this one, have to try it. Nice write...

BC

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-01-14 03:01 AM

Oh oh, that opens the doors of imagination really wide.
AND, watch that 'nibble me all over' it could become dangerous.

(smile)
Eric

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2009-01-14 12:11 PM

Talk about some awesome imagery!

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2009-01-14 10:13 PM

I lost track of where the words described the imagery and where the words became the image...nice blurring of the senses, with a totally new look at shaving

nice write...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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5 posted 2009-01-15 12:33 PM

Oh I'm glad people are liking this one!

Some poems are just fun to write, and this was most definitely one of them. It's a rip to write and smirk, simultaneously!

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2009-01-15 06:47 AM

~smiling~ Ed, nice to be reading you

M

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2009-01-15 10:15 AM

I love it when the naughty little boy in you grabs hold of your pen!

Linda

r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

8 posted 2009-01-16 12:34 PM

rat......neat job...enjoyed the sharing of the fun.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2009-01-21 03:23 PM

I'm glad that it was fun to write... for it's certainly fun to read! *S* You find poems in the most amazing places... I absolutely love the tramp passage! LOL

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