Open Poetry #44 |
Your Eyes |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Darkness surrounds me as I lie in this place Inside my mind is the outline of your face I feel your hand interlocked in mine I feel you, my imagination inclines Although such a distance keeps us apart I still feel you here, I feel you in my heart I can’t stand your warmth missing around my chest The warmth you give me when you lay your head to rest For the time being, your loves warmth will do But nothing can equal the warmth of holding you I can only picture you beside me within my mind’s cries A picture’s worth a thousand words, but million’s in your eyes I dream dreams of a life with you lasting forever Sleeping beside you I’ll make sure were together Night after night, dad after day Something’s finally going my way I can only hope that he won’t come snatch you My grasp is so tight love, my arms will entrap you There you’ll be safe for eternity’s span I’m pretty sure that all of this is part of His plan Times change, people and places grow old But through all of it my heart you’ll still hold I promise, love, this is completely true Second after second, I’ll always love you Sometimes in life things take you by surprise I knew this was true when I saw myself in your eyes I can’t wait to look into those gems once more When I stare into them I see your soul’s inner core What composes your actions and writes your sweet words Lies within those two. |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very tender and lovely indeed. Well done. Regards. |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
ARH The question you seem to ask, though subtly and silently, is, "Can love still burn brightly though both are far apart?" To reassure you, I know of a love that first sparked across a 4,500 miles gap - and that distance has now diminished so that both are happily together. Give it time, it does happen. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Rex, for reading and replying! it is the greatest joy of a poet, or a writer, to be read, listened to, heard. ~ARH |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
David, Thank you, yes long distance relationships are hard, but not impossible, I guess your love in a long distance relationship is a higher love, a stronger love, a test of time... thanks for the encouragement and the insight! ~ARH |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A gentle sublime thought, and a beautiful gift. I can't wait to look deep into your soulful eyes, so full of passion and love once again. All my love, Luke. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
My Luke, The meeting of our eyes, our souls, will be one of intense love! Waiting is the hardest part, but worth it~ ~ARH |
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