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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-05-26 07:28 PM


Ruby on the Pier

If I could give my heart
to more than one woman
and she could give
her heart to me
it would be one
with ruby red lips
that kissed me
so soft and sensually.
She seemed so sweet
and sincere, as we shared
warm kisses on
the Seal Beach Pier,
a warm evening to remember
on a cold night in November.

JamesLee
25May
2009



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Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
Posts 236
Oklahoma
1 posted 2009-05-26 08:48 PM


Such memories speak volumes
and come alive when recalled,

Bloodline

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-05-28 12:41 PM


Dear James, kisses on the Pier have surely something special. The ruby moment has inspired a lovely poem.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2009-05-28 01:30 PM


a poem as a love picture, a very enjoyable read and full of romantism.

regards

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2009-05-28 05:59 PM


Thank you Bloodline, Margherita and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...James
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