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"A New Life" & "Curtains Aglow at Dawn"
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"A New Life" & "Curtains Aglow at Dawn" |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy 
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two poems married and marred etched by passing watermarks tongued wishes and moony beacons the seam to mend; they seem to remind of what use is one line without an other with enflamed orange-spit eyes they jealously guard their lariat hoping tomorrow will be caught napping in a lethargy of foreseen moments green are the coke-bottle views of an old dream and a New Life -------------------------------- Curtains Aglow at Dawn seeing one day fold upon another the sunrise so far away from the 'set and the lover's sonnets told in moonlight the romantic sigh of spooned wakers in morn one day folds into another for one without the other foretells a sleep that has no rise and the dream ah, the dream goes on forever 1/10/09 Jeff Feezle |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is a real treat. I don't visit PIP as often as I would like so when I do pop in I grin an extra wide grin to be able to read you. (Thanks to Maureen, I know who you are. *s) Lovely poems - and great visuals! Chanson |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
LB!!~!!!~!!!! What's the haps girl? Just today I was looking at a poem I wrote in 2000 called Little Bird's Birthday! What a hoot! Thanks, Dearheart! Miss your work: can you make some time and make some poetry? Maureen is great! LOL Feel free to ask her to fill ya in on the past few years. You're still in my happy thoughts, LB! Vous nous manquez, Chanson! Jeff |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Fantastic writing!!! ~ Rich in language, thought forms, visuals! etc. etc. etc.  "green are the coke-bottle views of an old dream and a New Life" and yes, "the dream goes on forever"  EA |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hey you...I've missed you! Oh my gosh, I remember that poem! Just the other day while cleaning out my computer armior I found alot of poems that I had (on a slow day and while very ambitious, I located and printed out oodles of poems) but UNFORTUNATELY I don't have that one and wish I had! I haven't written in a verrrrrrry long time. I don't know why, I just haven't. *humph. Maybe to get myself back into it again, I'll post an oldie and at least look the old ones over for inspiration. It's so great to touch base with you, Jeff!!! Be well, LB |
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