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Oklahoma Rose
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0 posted 2009-05-24 12:04 PM


Dreams Come Alive


In the mid of night
With warm loving arms you come
To caress my soul
Igniting a fire within
I thought was long burned out

You’d always be there
If only I didn’t wake up
But night slips away
As the sun starts to rise high
Bringing in a brand new day

I wait for the night
For those dreams to come alive
As you hold me close
Feeling your tender caress
As you light that fire again

5-23-09
Oklahoma Rose


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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-05-24 11:43 AM


Yes, sometimes our dreams are so real and vivid,
it's a crying shame when we wake up to reality.

Nice poem~

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-05-24 12:05 PM


Those dreams bring healing, dear Sue. You rendered your longing beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
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3 posted 2009-05-24 03:21 PM


Ah, and a rose can
be a wildflower, yes?
soft and supple words
to make any dream sigh,

Bloodline

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2009-05-24 03:57 PM


Perhaps the dream state is the real reality.  We can't really know for sure because we're sleeping - well, certainly part of us is sleeping and the other half - loving perhaps?
Dream on and write on!

Helen

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5 posted 2009-05-25 04:08 PM


Yep, Sue, I agree with Margherita.  Those dreams can be very healing.  I like how you share in your poetry.

Thank you.
Alison

Oklahoma Rose
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6 posted 2009-05-25 04:30 PM


BluesSerenade, yes it is a shame, when I wake up. I would rather stay in my dreams.

Margherita, thank you for reading and replying. I suppose you are right. But, my question is,
how long does it take for a heart to fully mend?

Bloodline, thank you for your very nice reply. And, Welcome to Pip. It's nice to see another Okie
here at Pip.

Honeybunch, I would rather stay in that dream state. I do both, sleep and love. LOL!

Alison, my dear friend, thank you for your very kind reply. I am glad you like my poetry. Maybe, just maybe, what I write may touch someone else in some way.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2009-05-27 12:02 PM


~Talk about hot....that fire of yours is burning through your words...

~ARH

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2009-05-27 10:35 PM


O those times to dream, to make the impossible become ours again
Margherita
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9 posted 2009-05-28 11:11 AM


You ask, how long it takes ... your heart is healed in that moment when you succeed in listening to your soul's voice, when it whispers that you are loved ALWAYS, IN EVERY MOMENT. We can always cherish memories, but we must not waste our present time opportunities by clinging to them. "I am loved, I am LOVE!" say it and then life will unfold according to your belief. And you will be showered with new gifts of love, trust.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Osprey
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10 posted 2009-05-28 11:18 AM


If the night brings sweet dreams, then we don't need the reality of day. So well captured in your poem.
WTBAKELAR
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11 posted 2009-05-28 05:27 PM


Don't you wish we could pre-program our dreams like a vcr?

Like on Mondays, Dream about Saturdays,and lovers,
and on Tuesdays, Dream about Saturdays,and lovers,
and on Wednesday,,,, well you get the point.

Sweet dreams, Sue,
Tracey.

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