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HopeS
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0 posted 2009-05-22 02:15 PM





Its Makes No Sense To Me

How could someone close
Just simply say goodbye
I find it hard to understand
So I have to question why

The hurt I am going through
As another day passes by
They now refuse to answer
Can someone tell me why

Knowing me year after year
Sharing the friendship key
Why did they say goodbye
It makes no sense to me

They have no need to doubt
A friend I would always be
I wonder have they realised
What this has done to me


Hope ©2009

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2009-05-22 02:18 PM


They probably haven't realized and don't want to. This work just tugs at my heart.. Thank you for sharing it.
Margherita
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2 posted 2009-05-23 12:52 PM


Dear Hope, you never fail to make me want to reach out with a big tender hug, to warm your heart.

Your heart is a most beautiful place, may sadness be banned from it, you deserve sunshine.

We don't always find out why people do things ... as Jesus said: Forgive them Lord for they know not what they have done ...

Love and peace, beautiful Poetess.
Margherita

Klassy Lassy
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3 posted 2009-05-23 04:24 PM


Nor to me does "goodbye" make anysense in a friendship.     Palpable sadness...
~KL

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2009-05-23 04:50 PM


Ofttimes, I believe, people have not a clue as to how their actions affect the feelings of others. Someone as sensitive and loving as you, deserves nothing less than what you show and give to others.

Your poetry touches your readers because you write about emotions that many of us have experienced at one time or another.

Love and a warm hug,

Linda

Billie Cullimore
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5 posted 2009-05-23 04:53 PM




Come here my dear, you need a hug.

. Two things we can give away and still keep are hugs and smiles.

I give you both.

Billie C.

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