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Cherry Blossoms |
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firechild Junior Member
since 2009-05-18
Posts 14 |
Cherry blossoms florescent wings, aloft a honey-layered crust a heart, elevated ignite the cerebrum with ethereal delights a soul, cloaked with the rhythmic cadence of cherry blossoms echoed on the virginal breath of spring as he melts and she walks, pass the jealous daffodils… |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome dear firechild, to Pip! Your poem is absolutely delightful! Looking forward to reading more of you. Love, Margherita  |
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firechild Junior Member
since 2009-05-18
Posts 14 |
thank you Margherita your comments are most wellcome. cheers firechild |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Welcome, Firechild. Hope to see more of your lovely poetry. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, firechild! Your poem has me smiling ~ and feeling good!  ..."cherry blossoms echoed on the virginal breath of spring" That is downright 'poetical'! Those were just a few of my favourite lines! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the sense of whimsy. Very cute and clever poem! Much enjoyed, and a warm welcome to PIP~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I've danced among falling cherry blossoms, and my feet retraced each step while reading this delightful write! Welcome! |
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