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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
forgiveness, a foreign concept out of style with today's age when it happened, i cried narcissistic tears of naivety and betrayal i have grown in spirit and now i am mourning the hurt child you used to be crying for the hatred that has consumed your humanity but i refuse to follow in your footsteps i was drunk on disillusionment and bitterness now, abstaining from the bottle, i am able to see clearly to follow in your footsteps would be to give you power to hate you would be to wrong you echoing words i stated numbly long before i was ready i finally forgive you and myself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome, dear Kara, to Pip! Beautiful, profound first entry! I love your reflections on forgiveness. Love, Margherita  |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Welcome to Pip, kindredspirit. This is a beautiful poem. One I can understand. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well done! Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
thank you all for reading, and for your encouragement!  |
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HAZARD Junior Member
since 2009-06-24
Posts 40ENGLAND |
hi - am new - but looking to get down to some serious work -and fun! 16 lines which talks of bitterness and forgiveness - tells the tale of love and aspirations and growth and self annealing psychology... after some wacky alcoholic binges - wow! Good to read. HAZARD |
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