Open Poetry #44 |
purple poetry |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
for the challenge-- /pip/Forum29/HTML/002336.html * * * Priesthood coupled royalty exalted kiss the g'damned ring forget your sanskrit all you know forget the scrolls you scribed and rolled stop the voices singing tongue? You'll hear the echoes dying young. A crude palette becomes undone when something squirms alive -- the sun swallowed by a slender throat virgin to the flames. * * * |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I really enjoyed this one!! Hope all is well with you... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Purple applause! The only things that are purple about me right now are my feet! Good response to a fun challenge, serenity! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I saw purple in the first line! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
forget your sanskrit all you know forget the scrolls you scribed and rolled You know they are trying to revive the use of it right? You rose to this one in fine purple passion lady. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Geeeeeez...it's because of fantastic poetry like this that makes me toss my pen down and grumble, "I can't beat that!!!" Seriously, this kind of writing is right up my alley. It's totally awesome, serenity. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its pyschedlic, spiritual and royal purple all at once |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Extremely captivating in its purple hues ... open to the most disquieting interpretations. Dear Karen, you treat purple with mastery, I would say! Love, Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This collection of lines is royal purple..... Intense deep reflections my dear you are a winner with all of us and always will be. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Purple Poetry" ~ I like the colour purple. I like poetry by the Serene One. I like the P P alliteration. It was sure to be a winner! ~ and it was! May your life be rife with purple passion! lol Linda |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most interesting! applause!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks Indya for the inspiration, and thank all of you lovely folk for reading. Love to all. |
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