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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-05-19 08:21 AM



you wore your wanting to dance hands there
at the end of your slender wrists

where you said a kiss was silly
because you were just a woman
and the lady had long been forgotten

you said my armor was softer then you imagined
as you drew words on the leather's willing

and asked me if I recognized how they sounded
with my eyes closed and did it bother me
that most had four letters at least for now

I didn't answer, so you took a second look
to see if I was really even there in mind

or somewhere else where you took my eyes
and tried to bury my imagination in your treasure
so I couldn't really ignore the temptation then

to sip woman wine and drink lady ache whiskey


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daark (forbidden)


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1 posted 2009-05-19 09:01 AM


This definitely not a morning coffee poem.  Maybe it's an Irish coffee poem.  But not really.  It's a turn the lights down dim, read in bed, and learn braille type poem.

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Kaoru
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2 posted 2009-05-19 09:11 AM


And I needed an Irish Coffee poem this morning, because I actually slept well.

Let us hope that the wine and whiskey are of good quality, so you'll never cease in wanting more.

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-05-19 09:40 AM


ms ali-san...oh, it is morning out?  whoops,,
thanks babe

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ms K..I suspect they will only get better with each additional sip?  thanks ms

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4 posted 2009-05-19 01:54 PM


And some indulgences don't leave hangovers. *G* Loved this! *s*
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-05-19 02:04 PM


ms suthern..they actually cure "hangovers?"

thanks lady

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