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firechild
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since 2009-05-18
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0 posted 2009-05-18 04:15 AM



as autumn
slumbers
on heavenly steps
and winter
dies
a silent death,
exhaling
its icy breath

I drift silently
among angels
exquisitely wrapped
in the aromatic decadence
of spring
while summer
impatiently
taps
her sun-soaked feet...


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2009-05-18 04:16 PM


Firechild,

this is a sure sun-fire winner!

Welcome to Passions!
Please, check your email for a
Very Special Welcome!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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2 posted 2009-05-18 04:54 PM


Nice, upbeat, simply stated pleasure.

Well done,  
Welcome to the Blue addiction,

You'll like it here.
Hope to read more of your work.
Tracey.

firechild
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3 posted 2009-05-20 03:15 AM


thank you sunshine & tracey

for wellcoming me to the forum and commenting on my work.
it is much appreciated

regards

hellfire

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Gaia
4 posted 2009-05-20 04:18 PM


Nicely done!
Welcome to the blue pages.

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