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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England

0 posted 2009-05-18 01:56 AM


You lie beside me; tender, sweet,
A velvet press of lips we'll meet,
Caresses soft, a loving touch,
Your beauty mine, it seems too much.

All heavens lights and woman's grace
Reflected 'pon your moonlit face,
Serenity anticipates,
An eve of gentle sighs awaits.

As oceans deep and dark as night,
Yet holding fast an angel's light,
A hand upon your heart, I'll rise
To count the stars within thine eyes.


For A Romantic Heart.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-05-18 03:45 AM


Sweet romantic inspiration. When two poets fall in  love fireworks are granted!

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-05-18 05:21 PM


My eyes are full of stars as we speak,
after reading the beauty of your
heart filled words,

yes, please do count these stars,
twinkle, twinkle.....

Love,
~A Romantic Heart~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-05-18 05:46 PM


See these stars in my eyes,
A thousand twinkles arise,
From the magic of your love,

As the moon pulls the tide,
you draw me close by your side,
From the devotion of your love,

Into your bosom my heart resides,
all my deep secrets I confide,
From the offering of my love,

All the heavens and the cosmos,
ten thousand angelic hosts,
cannot contain my love for you.

~You have my love, my heart~
I love you~
~ARH




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