Open Poetry #44 |
desert wanting |
unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
he is desert wanting weeping grains of sandsong that thirst through melt fingers he stirs mirage trances to draw sighcastles parched on tips of tongue in dreamtime oasis I dive his storms and ride that thunder chilled for seethe of fever gulping bolts of singewater grateful for the burning greening drought blooms succulents for taking this mesmer of the mesas sidewind glances sinuous shimmerdances perihelion the rise and ebb of dune in the cool night a woman rattles and coyotes moan his dusty ghosts H |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Heather, your inspiration is tangible within every word. A passionate write, born from your very special "unbound" creativity. To read and savor more than once! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP...you do make me think you should ride some...enjoyed this one!! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Amazing...soaking in the cool breath of your talent. Like a cool desert night. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Margherita Thank you, you are such a darling. BigD ...is that thunder in your pocket... CG Appreciate your kind comments, poet. L, H |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Been there, done that. Great feeling, Billie C. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
in dreamtime oasis I dive his storms and ride that thunder chilled for seethe of fever gulping bolts of singewater grateful for the burning Fantastic write... I was mesmerized! *S* |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Billie Do you still wear your t-shirt *winks* TY suthern Thank you kindly, poetess. L, H |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
unboundpoetess - a great write of your expressions, and thoughts... BC |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
TY Bill! Always appreciate you! H |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hot dang! Can you ever write! That's a scorcher in more ways than one! I'm thirsty for some more of your 'sensation'al poetry!!! Very well done! Highly creative! ~ and absorbing! EA |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Thank you , AngelDarling! You are a sweetie! H |
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