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Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2009-01-12 07:18 PM

How is it
you are always
in front,
of my gaze,

even when
my eyes
are clinched
shut.

Why is it
when I look
into your eyes,
I can’t
look away.

Your eyes of smoke,
and distance,

godly favors,

the dropped space,
lacerated time,

a wandering horse,
the tattered web,

of broken lace.

Our time is fugitive
like footprints,
in rainy mud

like sadness,
from your eyes,
kissed onto my skin
nursing upon

fruit,

and waves.

The loudest sound
I never heard
was the scream
from your undressed

eyes,

as they swallowed
my virility,
and raped,

my passion.

Feeding on
vibrant flowers.
I devoured,

the skin
of your earth,

your waterfall,

drowning me in petals,
dripping
onto the sky,

drops of silence
falling,

like grains of rain
crying into the lost,

eyes falling back,
a soft multitude,
a seasoned wave,

the stark saliva,
of the half bitten
moan.

Lay with me,

the me in come,
the thru in thrust,
the you in youth,
the us,

in trust.

Let our hearts gather
twigs of future,
and build a fire of
memory,

and unanswered,
consummations.

We are the buried,
the misplaced,

a silk solitude,

of roots,
a fiery frost,
the bend of ecstasies

the winding night,
that lost its,

shoes.

I have no name,
I have no, shame

you are my wind.

And the soul
of our, sky

weeps, forlorn.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-01-12 09:44 PM

Now Richy... you keep writing these beautiful thoughts ok... and I'll be glued to every line!! loved this!!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-01-12 11:02 PM

Richy - you certainly have a wonderful pen, I'm always entranced when I read these writings of yours. I truly enjoy them...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2009-01-13 12:52 PM

Enjoyed...James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-01-13 12:51 PM

quote:
Our time is fugitive
like footprints,
in rainy mud

Picked this out, but there are many great lines here, dear Richy. You are so very intense!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-01-13 06:07 PM

Oh dear, I must time my reading of your sultry pennings to just before I go to bed ~ and not just before I am about to have dinner! lol

You've done it again!!!

Another

Linda

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2009-02-01 05:14 PM

Richy,

You say it all so well in your poems. I smile at your use of words and delight in your expression.

Alison

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2009-02-02 08:46 AM

your words are like a magic carpet ride
that take us to a place of dream
really sultry and nice poem

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2009-02-16 05:21 AM

Thank you Roniece dear,
just make sure its not super glue okay.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2009-02-16 05:23 AM

Dear Bill, you are a real gentleman,
and amazing poet.

Thanks friend!

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2009-02-16 05:23 AM

Thanks JM.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

11 posted 2009-02-16 05:25 AM

Ahh Margherita thats nothing, you should see me camping, thats when I really get in tents!

Sorry, couldn't help meself.

Thanks Much!

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2009-02-16 05:28 AM

You're so right Linda, I could see where my writing would make someone's stomach ready to retch, and reading them at night, you'll be bored asleep before you finish the first line.

Thanks Hon, you're the best!!

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

13 posted 2009-02-16 05:29 AM

Thank you Ali Dear, I hope you're staying warm up in Kool Kountry.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

14 posted 2009-02-16 05:30 AM

Thank you Michele dear,
I really appreciate that!

i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

15 posted 2009-04-07 07:19 PM

i have no name...
i have no shame.

wow.

"omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2009-04-07 07:50 PM

Richy - you do have a romantic touch with your words, and I enjoy reading what you write. Very nice, and well written...

BC

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

17 posted 2009-04-21 12:40 PM

quote:
Lay with me,

the me in come,
the thru in thrust,
the you in youth,
the us,

in trust.

Richy,

You keep writing them. I keep reading them. Beautiful.

Alison

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