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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2009-05-17 11:18 AM

Liquid Play

there was laughter
in the rain drops
and colors dripped
to every hue
of the spectrum
taste had the flavor
of urgency to come
as it dizzy danced
silently on my lips
I did not search for them
yet they sought me out
as wind changed
the direction of these
sequins in air
twirling in their play

"I'm so hard to handle
I'm selfish and I'm sad."
— Joni Mitchell

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-05-17 01:34 PM

"Liquid play" of the senses sharing in the beauty of nature's dance.

Very captivating.

Love,
margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-05-17 02:16 PM

Very well done, Helen, I love rain and you have a lovely way of looking ay it.
Ida

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

3 posted 2009-05-17 02:20 PM

Well done...as a confirmed rain lover I enjoyed very much.

Regards.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2009-05-17 02:33 PM

Beautiful!

Love,
Eric

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-05-19 11:57 AM

there was laughter
in the rain drops
and colors dripped
to every hue
of the spectrum

Every time I read your work, I'm grateful for pen and paper... and these blue pages that let me read what you create with pen and paper.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2009-05-21 03:26 PM

Another beauty, my friend...love your style.

j.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA