a kissing (an easier version)

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2009-01-12 06:26 PM

a kissing
slow and earnestly
lip exploring lip
a sip
of souls
in this experiment
of curiousity between two friends
with just the right pull of tension
catching thought within the eye
both of them considering
the fleeting opportunity
of one moment now
that just might be the scenic route
off the freeway, homeward bound
catching whims o' wisps of love
that make me feel alive again,
wishing I could just relive
first times, every time.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2009-01-12 08:10 PM

..."with just the right pull of tension
catching thought within the eye
both of them considering
the fleeting opportunity"...
My favorite part.

like threading a needle, a lasso of desire!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2009-01-12 08:21 PM

Kathleen!

yay

and hey...it's so good to see you.

I think there is an art to kissing, m'self.

But what Karen needs is to learn how to allow herself to be kissed.

*twinkling*

great to see you lovie!

I DID IT AGAIN. *smacks head*

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-01-12 10:24 PM

"a sip of souls" Very clever write.
Ida

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-01-12 10:58 PM

serenity blaze - those first times are so wonderful it seems. Nice write...

BC

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-01-21 03:10 PM

Except... sometimes those second kisses are even better than the first. *S*

How wistful this leaves me... *S*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2009-01-21 03:38 PM

wishing I could just relive
first times, every time.

~*~

lovin' it!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2009-01-21 11:40 PM

Hey you! By Jove, I think that's the answer....never more than a first kiss! (lol....just kidding.) Love reading you, Ser and have been missing you......jojo

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2009-01-21 11:46 PM

"catching whims o' wisps of love" ...just love this

oceanvu2
Senior Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA

9 posted 2009-01-22 12:03 PM

RE: "But what Karen needs is to learn how to allow herself to be kissed."

Practice, practice, practice!

Best, Jimmy

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