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Johan
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0 posted 2009-05-17 06:25 AM



Seagulls soaring over white water
wings stiff in the black sky
storm clouds race the raging winds
as breaking seas go by
white water surging from astern
thrusting bows deep down
drowning the bare-breasted figure-head
shroud covered sails, dripping
touching the dark green sea
a barnacled weed covered hull
broaching as the mast breaks free
flotsam washed up on the cold grey sands
no last post played
no home coming, no welcome band.

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-05-17 06:59 AM


Well done, dear Johan! There are so many who have had this sad destiny. But their souls soar free above with the seagulls, I believe ...

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2009-05-19 09:16 AM


You know, in the US many people are caught up in the television show "The Deadliest Catch" - it is about fishermen in the Bering Sea off the Aleutian Chain of Alaska.  Sometimes when we see too much on tv, we grow complacent about real life dangers.

In Homer, Alaska there is a Harvester Memorial on Homer Spit.  It is a statue of a mariner under a small shelter.  Those who are lost at sea are named in within the walls surrounding the sailor.  

Some are people in my memories - so, for those mariners who never come home, I thank you for this poem.

Alison

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