Open Poetry #44 |
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Monkey On The Moon |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
I raced with a monkey on the moon, but the dust got in our eyes. So we traded weightless smalltalk, jousted with our lies. Though he was monkey proud and male, there came a reaching out as friends. The lies gave way to mutual trust on which all friends depend. He spoke of evolution, and if I'd lend an ear, he'd prove to me that apes were not the first of us sent here. He told me of a human race from which he had evolved, said Darwin wasn't really wrong, he'd left it just half-solved. He said: ' Cruelty is the bane of man as onward he exists, but acknowledgement is not the way, hypocrisy persists. That fault of man, is simply he, is ever doomed to fail, for he seeks too many answers; there is no Holy Grail. A universal spiral is spinning in the null; man will come, and he will go: My eyes? Do you see the cull?' [This message has been edited by Osprey (05-17-2009 05:32 AM).] |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"said Darwin wasn't really wrong, he'd left it just half-solved." Heh, very cool poem. I enjoyed it muchly. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and everybody's got something to hide except for me and my monkey? ![]() Enjoyed this, with its twisty turns. |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very cool writing here, Osprey. You gave me something to think about as I wander away for a bit. Thank you. A |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Great humor, great message Liked the metaphor of monkey on the moon. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting write, Ida |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed this monkey's tale...we are doomed to cling to a swinging tail while searching for that elusive grail. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Osprey, This is cleverly pessimistic. It’s amusing in its way. I always knew that the man in the moon was all alone. Love Bobby |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Very clever I enjoyed it. Billie C. |
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