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Marcia MT
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0 posted 2009-05-15 03:57 PM



The Garden

She sits in her garden of yesterdays
listening for the crunch of gravel
beyond the bend in the road.

A hat with ribbons fading
shielding her face
her hands resting in her lap
and she waits and listens.

The birds singing in the orchard
go unheard. She hears only
the swish of tires on the highway
below the hill where she
resides, in a fortress from the world.

Each evening she prepares
a dinner with care for two
and eats alone reading his letters
over and over the pages worn.

When she's able, she sleeps
her last thought of the day, her prayer,
maybe tomorrow passers by
won't see her sitting in the garden
listening and waiting.

© Marcia Miller-Twiford


© Copyright 2009 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2009-05-15 05:59 PM


that's one dedicated lady ... enjoyed

Rex

Osprey
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2 posted 2009-05-15 06:38 PM


Simply oozes loneliness.
'The fields are always wet with rain
after a summer shower, when I saw you standing
in the garden, in the garden, wet with rain'
Van Morrison.

Oklahoma Rose
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3 posted 2009-05-15 06:48 PM


This is a beautiful, but sad poem, Marcia. It's so nice to see you here.
Marcia MT
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4 posted 2009-05-15 06:53 PM


Thank you Sue. I feel like the new kid on the block but am sure I'll get acquainted and become comfortable quickly. I appreciate your reading and commenting.


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5 posted 2009-05-15 07:25 PM


I enjoyed this verse:

"Each evening she prepares
a dinner with care for two
and eats alone reading his letters
over and over the pages worn."

A very "visable" poem, indeed.

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6 posted 2009-05-16 02:14 AM


I can't tell you how much I like this poem.  It is splendid.  I am so glad that you joined us here, Marcia.

Alison

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7 posted 2009-05-16 06:21 PM


"Each evening she prepares
a dinner with care for two
and eats alone reading his letters
over and over the pages worn."

That gave me chills.

Beautiful.


1slick_lady
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8 posted 2009-05-16 08:30 PM


marcia
we are so happy you are here

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2009-05-18 07:35 PM


Fine writing...James
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