Open Poetry #44 |
Death by Ghost Hunters |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
She is reported to have died in the bedroom, on the right, at the top of the stairs. Frequently seen near the window, with face in hands, weeping Often seen, climbing the stairway and entering her place of death Declared to be a residual haunting, with no intelligence involved. Just a scene, imprinted upon the fabric of time. Ever lasting, Ever looping. Investigators were surprised when they asked, "Is there anyone here who wishes to contact us?" and a voice responded, "Hello" Interaction with an intelligent entity caused their hearts to pound with excitement. "Hello !", they shouted back. "Are you there?" "Of course I'm here... where are you ?" "Can you tell us how you died?" There was only silence. "Please, tell us how you died !" "What?" "Do you know that you are dead?" The silence was longer this time, followed by the faint sound of weeping. Then... only silence. After further background research, the Investigators learned that near the turn of the twentieth century, a woman had committed suicide in that house, in that room to the right, at the top of the stairs. Reports said that she had been complaining of hearing troubling voices. *** |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
And such is the circle. Held me a captive, as ever.(sorry, sage, this is so clever, I had to laugh. If you ever get to speak to her: tell her I'm sorry.) [This message has been edited by Osprey (05-15-2009 04:21 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You are among my favorite poets. I really like this - you made me smile too, but it was nice to have a bit of humor (is that black humor?). Good writing, Uriah. A |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Another good one by one of the best. latearrival |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very clever,well done and enjoyed. Regards. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2009/04/090427102229.htm |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
"Of course I'm here... where are you ?" HA!... i like this! Joe |
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Marcia MT Junior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 36California USA |
You had me hooked from the first stanza. It's been said that suicides never leave, are allowed no peace, no here after. Your poem has left me wondering if that's not true. When a poem lingers in the reader's mind you can feel assured it's a great write. I applaud you poet. |
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