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Open Poetry #44

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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2009-05-14 05:12 PM

When my eyes met you,
my heart could not stop beating,
enrich for your love.

Your voice was sincere,
your body was like iron steel,
yet your skin was soft.

You once hold me tight,
within your arms i felt glee,
feeling happy, warm.

You smiled like the sun,
loving every inch of it,
to the very end.

But soon it ended,
the warmth, the love, your sweetness,
it whithered away.

When my eyes meet you,
I feel aching pain, sadness,
a heart now frozen.

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