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Open Poetry #44
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vandana
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0 posted 2009-05-13 05:56 PM




Let Go

Let the sun shine
Through my eyes
God has given me love
Let the sun, the moon shine light
Through my open eyes
Far distant stars
Far away
From me
Where only my eyes light away
Where the light shine through
the eyes
Lord has given me love
To love
Because this love
we never let go
Yet
We find love in our hearts
That we never let it go
Let go
Let brand new day come
Through my life
Show me the way
To never let go
Of my heart

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2009-05-13 06:38 PM

Yo Vandana,

This poem is well thought out and presented.  I like it loads.

Love Bobby
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-05-14 12:06 PM

Love the reflection of stars.

Beautiful images, vandana.
Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2009-05-14 12:46 PM

hey...this is so soft, really enjoyed the loving images...

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Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2009-05-14 03:46 PM

Sweetly spoken and such a pleasure to read you always.  You present love well and leave no doubt that you know what it is.  
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