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Confusion That Clouds The Mind
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Confusion That Clouds The Mind |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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Note this is a work of fiction not fact! Confusion That Clouds The Mind Beating faster my heart almost burst Not believing that I will see you again,"and yet" Here you are standing so strong and strait My son! my son! you have come home to me, Reaching out to touch him "I tried" With all my strength "I did tried"! But I just couldn't feel him next to me A voice said! Annie dear; your son has died.. Let me help you to your seat He is there! I say right there! he has to be? That's not your son sweet Annie That's the new doctor cant you see My mind begins to get clearer And I see a diffrent face relay Is my son on his way to see me? I need to see him today, Annie 13-05-2009 [This message has been edited by Anniepimm (05-14-2009 05:26 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A poignant story, a true scenario for someone no doubt. Good to read you again! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Annie, Dementia happens to many of us when we get older. You've done nice work on this. Love Bobby |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Midnitesun that's nice of you i am glad you enjoyed it  Thank you Bobby my mum has dementia and she doesnt know us half the time, so I guess it is based on that, and the knowledge I have of loosing a child Annie |
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