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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2009-05-12 06:20 PM



He still loves America,
one of many departments
within a giant Department Store.

He remembers when
he first saw a bar code
on a pack of Zig-Zags,
and how he knew then
that the party was over.

He picked up his date
and went to the gas station...
hoping to impress her by
taking her someplace expensive.

He still loves the
"Land of Opportunity"
and knows that Opportunity
is always knocking.

Even though...
it sometimes
wears coveralls,
and people pretend
not to be at home.

***

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2009-05-12 08:17 PM


Okay, okay, I just couldn't stand it. This is the third time I have been here!

Da Blaze shall bite de bit.

Dere. I said it.

Loved the zigs in your zags, dawlin'.




Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-05-12 08:26 PM


Yo XOx Uriah xOX,

I alway wear a white tie and tails when I go to the gas station.

It's a formal event now.

Bobby

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