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2islander2
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0 posted 2009-05-09 09:47 AM



seagull is aerodynamic
without knowing it,
let’s call that :
to make the most of life.

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1 posted 2009-05-09 07:44 PM


Yo Yann,

Seagulls are well designed for the work they do.

Bobby

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2 posted 2009-05-10 02:26 AM


Thanks Bobby, I was just looking them in the sky, they perfectly glide in air, it is some kind of marvellous show...They do it without explaining...Thank you for the comment

yann

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3 posted 2009-05-12 12:48 PM


When I was little I wanted to be a seagull because the could fly, soar and swim.  It seemed like the best of everything to me.  I still really enjoy watching them.

Thanks, yann, for this poem.

Alison

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4 posted 2009-05-12 06:56 AM


Yes Alison, it seems that children have eyes and grownups bcome blind, the flight of a seagull is a stupendous prospective that tells liberty and life....Thank you for your concerned and interesting comment.

yann  

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5 posted 2009-05-13 05:27 AM


You reminded me of "Jonathan Livingstone" with this perfect little gem, dear Yann.

We should indeed try to imitate their grace, using our soul wings to soar ...

Love,
Margherita

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