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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we didn't speak of the music's hand how it seemed to slip up our seams and touch our heart canvas without wind yet yes, there were billowing sounds within the sky of our lover's ribs I often looked at and into your eyes almost as often as you turned away and gave yourself into the afternoon pressing your face into quiet places so I couldn't know the way of your mind you touched me when I wasn't looking and I touched you when you were so the blushes came onto your skin like a new dress that was mostly unread ___________ daark (forbidden) |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
DS: This is a delicious, forbiddingly temptatious read,that had me right on that edge. I even love the title. Keeping this one. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you friend Raindance |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sometimes, it feels as though you are describing what most would call my own flaws. Giving myself to something much more than human touch. Then again, whether visible or not, the sun is always there isn't it? Great write. Loved it, as usual. =) |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
How beautifully coy she is. And how beautifully you have told me so. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tall, dark, and handsome, your poems have some of the most intriguing titles! ~ and what always follows suit, is mighty intriguing, as well! i.e. "you touched me when I wasn't looking and I touched you when you were so the blushes came onto your skin"   Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K....thanks for wearing the words ms..I appreciate you ______________ thanks oz, it is a pleasure to have your review _______________ ms ea..prozac and novocane is all it takes to get the titles..not sure which does what though..(grinz) thanks lady!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your mind captures your heart and viceversa and the result is again awesome ... Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ms mar..you bless me |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wanna share some clam chowder with me? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san.. sure if you wear those cute little rubber boots again..thanks babe |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Daark, You endlessly amaze me with your words.... Mucho Muy Bueno Senor..... |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
D,. this has a sad feeling to it. I pray for the stitches or our passions that bind the pieces of our lives.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mag, thanks amigo ________________ ms spudd..somber perhaps, but it was not sad really, thanks ms |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
we didn't speak of the music's hand how it seemed to slip up our seams and touch our heart canvas without wind Music has a way of doing that, doesn't it? *S* If ever I lose one of my senses (instead of just my mind *G*)... I hope that loss doesn't deny me music... for surely my blood would cease to flow. *S* And uh... sorry 'bout that... I got sidetracked. *G* But it's your fault for layering your lines so wonderfully. *nodding innocently* you touched me when I wasn't looking and I touched you when you were so the blushes came onto your skin I wanna write like you when I grow up. *S* Fantastic! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...you bless me babe, thank you!! and as for your writing, I savor your art just as it is. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks james |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
like a new dress that was mostly unread''' oh betting you know exactly how to read them....  love this sir!~~**~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Lauren...thanks babe!! |
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