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Open Poetry #44

If you move away

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2009-05-08 03:13 AM

If you move away,
I fall,
if you nudge me,
I tumble,
If you cry,
I trip,
if you mock,
I knock down,
if you go
I come a cropper,
if you leave,
I collapse,
I stand up
by your side,
you are
my very own
balance.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (05-08-2009 11:48 AM).]

Osprey
Member

since 2009-04-12

Posts 249

1 posted 2009-05-08 05:29 AM

Yes, how we all need such a balance in our lives. Alone, we often tumble.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-05-08 06:19 AM

So true and well expressed, dear Yann. Maybe we not always want to admit it, but that's how it happens. If it's reciprocal, harmony unfolds. Loved this.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-05-08 11:18 AM

At times, love can be quite the balancing act!

~ May you both provide the perfect counter-balance to the other! Then harmony prevails on both sides of the love equation!

Adorable write, adorable Yann the Man!

Linda

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2009-05-08 11:21 AM

enjoyed

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