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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2009-05-07 09:01 PM







Each full moon reminds me of Marge and then I have to take pictures and write her a moon poem.


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

© Copyright 2009 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Raindance
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1 posted 2009-05-08 08:19 AM


Titia,
I love poetry about the moon, and this presentation is outstanding! Awesome picture and artwork. I'm keeping this one!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-05-08 07:56 PM


Beautiful photo and poem, Titia. So each month you'll present us with another moon write. YAY!!!
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2009-05-08 11:49 PM


"Behind a tree she found her spot, but could not hide her flare"

Really liked this.  

Sweet poem and so aptly penned.  

Oklahoma Rose
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4 posted 2009-05-09 03:10 PM


Titia, this is absolutely beautiful. Yes, our Marge sure like writing about the moon. Thank you for this.
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5 posted 2009-05-11 02:46 PM


This is both a lovely work in its own right and a beautiful way of remembering a friend... well done! *S*
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6 posted 2009-05-12 12:42 PM


Titia,

This is stunning.  The poem is beautiful all by its lonesome - the photograph is wonderful - the shape of the words perfect.  You done good - Marge is smiling, I know.  I am too.

Thank you for such art.

Alison

Tracie
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7 posted 2009-05-12 08:30 AM


Titia my friend this is a beautiful poem! It is hard to believe English is not your home language. I have read this poem so many times, just enjoying the word play. I am printing it out to hang on my wall. The picture is gorgeous, and of course tne mention of my Mom in there makes it special for me too. Thank you for sharing your art, you are quite good.
sandgrain
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8 posted 2009-05-12 02:41 PM


How nice that Tracy gets to enjoy this 'moon' tribute.  I certainly enjoyed every letter, form, and thought it contains.

God bless,
   Rae

Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2009-05-12 03:29 PM


She did indeed know how to present the glory of the moon in all beauty.  A treat to read you and a wonderful and heartfelt reminder.  
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10 posted 2009-05-12 10:02 PM


Beautiful Titia - I don't call them full moons anymore, they are Marge moons.
nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2009-05-13 06:49 AM


I love the hiding moon, Titia...

M

Marcia MT
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12 posted 2009-05-15 04:51 PM


Hello Titia,
I just joined PIP today and it's very nice to see you here. Your poem and the graphic are beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes because it brought back all the wonderful memories of dear Marge. Ever since she passed whenever I look at the moon I see her lovely face in it.


steavenr
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13 posted 2009-05-16 09:58 PM


a nice write in a lovely tribute...thank you for sharing and helping us remember
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