Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Is Misunderstood |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Some people take Bones for being empty-headed, I mean, like how could a kid forced to do what Bones does to stay alive possibility have any intelligence at all. They would be very mistaken. When Bones was given the opportunity to attend school, he did very well. People that think Bones is a dullard, should take his place out on the street, and see how long they would survive. Take my word for it, they wouldn’t survive at all. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well I have never thought this of Bones, Bobby, and I never will... RDB I do not know what a 'dullard' is? I will go look it up xxx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Most kids now are street wise But i would hate to rely on my wits in the street life, Good poem Bobby i liked reading it, it has a wring of truth within it, Well Penned.. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, You've always been a good friend to Bones, and the little guy is very appreciative of that. Let me know if you have trouble with "dullard" in the dictionary. Love Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know what you mean Bobbby and I KNOW street life and it's no cake walk! Survival is the bottom line. Been real close to being there myself. Thrown in jail the whole schmaze. You don't hear, "would you like to supersize that"? On the street! Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Anniepimm, For reading, and for your kind comments on the poem. The streets here in the hood require a very specialized knowledge of the human terrain. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, I'm pleased the poem worked for you. Street life is always a minute by minute affair, with always an unpleasant surprise lurking just around the corner. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
There's many different types of intelligence. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yes dear Ida, What you say is very true. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love Bobby and Bones |
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