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Open Poetry #44

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Marc-Andre
Senior Member

since 2008-12-07

Posts 501

0 posted 2008-12-29 01:14 PM

I am a botanist,
Black roses are your eyes:
Inside my heart a cyst
Used to induce such sighs;
But now the ousted biles
Have been replaced with smiles.

I am an alchemist,
Your fingers are the stone:
My ribcage was a cist
Where pain remained a drone;
I fell in love with you
And now I breathe anew.

You are the Holy Grail,
That holds the cherished blood:
And when my heart was frail
Your smile removed the crud;
And bliss is my equerry
Since you agreed to marry.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-12-29 04:01 PM

Very good news MA, I love the progress of your poem as the one of your sentiments...Thank you for the well written poem.

yann

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2008-12-29 04:09 PM

Dear Yang, thy Yin's own heart wouldst surely smile upon reading this poem of love and appreciation!

Blessings of love and joy for you both in the coming new year ~ and for many a blessed wedded year to follow!

Marc-Andre
Senior Member

since 2008-12-07

Posts 501

3 posted 2008-12-29 08:25 PM

Heartfelt thanks for the nice comments

Mark

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