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Hunger
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Hunger |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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It’s a physical ache, this hunger One impossible to describe Longing for a life sustaining morsel To savor every given bite Oh, like oxygen your beauty is Feed me from the depths of you Save someone from a cruel fate And help the light shine through Maddening really, can’t shake the thought Of the intensity of this desire How lonely because no one else suffers This need to succumb to the fire Let me have but just a taste Even if it would kill not to have more Still I would relish the memory That my mouth had once explored |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My heart be still! (Note to Universe: Don't take that literally! lol) Nothing like a hungry man to whet the appetite of a woman! Lucky be she!  Linda |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
This is so good I can taste it. Almost erotic. Nice. Tracey |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Let me have but just a taste Even if it would kill not to have more Still I would relish the memory That my mouth had once explored If this doesn't have the lady saying yes yes yes, it's only because she's trying to catch her breath. *S* Sensuality at its best!!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such powerful aching! Most enticing. Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
...wonders if I was hungry before I read this poem ... No matter - I am hungry now. Nice poem there, CG. Very nice poetry you wrote. Alison |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is really very nice...a solid piece |
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