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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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0 posted 2009-05-04 01:22 PM



They say
I played
at your party last night
and that it was one
Hell of a bash.

I'm sorry I could not attend

I had my own party going on,
and none of you were invited.

I'm sorry
if requests
were not fulfilled.
I usually focus upon
the ones that are yelled the loudest,
and those were coming from inside my head;
Screaming, "Play what the hell you wanna play !"

The brain is like a sponge.

Oh yeah,

and often it needs rinsing.
When submerged, all sorts
of crud tends to rise to the surface.

Memories dart by,
like a rabbit in the headlights
on a foggy highway.

The rabbit always disappears
and I can never clearly see
where it or I are going.

I'm rambling

I need sleep

Oh yeah,

I need to write a note.

"If you must wake me...
make sure you put my
sunglasses on me
before you shake me,
and wake me no earlier
than twenty minutes after
the new coffee maker
has gotten out of bed."

***

© Copyright 2009 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2009-05-04 01:59 PM


cute

WTBAKELAR
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2 posted 2009-05-04 02:36 PM


Memories dart by,
like a rabbit in the headlights
on a foggy highway.

Would this be a "FUZZY MEMORY?"

Tracey

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since 2009-04-12
Posts 249

3 posted 2009-05-04 06:07 PM


Oh yes, I've been to a few parties that I didn't attend, but no sunglasses or any amount of coffee would justify me being shaken before I stirred.
I do like to read your poems. Top notch.

Magnus
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4 posted 2009-05-04 06:13 PM


BELIEVE IT OR NOT,  YOUR POETRY IS ADDICTIVE.

//BARRY//

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-05-04 06:19 PM


That's some note! ~ and some party! ~ Within AND without! lol

~ and ya lived ta tell the story!

Love your 'rye' wit!

XO
EA


unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
Posts 477

6 posted 2009-05-04 06:20 PM


I always enjoy you.

Heather

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