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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2009-05-03 05:24 PM



He strolled into our small town that day
a hat shading his face from the sun
little did I guess, as a child of ten,
through him, my life had just begun.

He was a stranger, dusty from travel
his boots were little more than soles
he carried a bulging pack on his shoulder
wore a gray shirt and jeans with holes

He came to our little run down motel
and rented a room for a week
I passed him on the way to school
he nodded, but didn’t speak.

I saw him sitting under the walnut tree
next to Jim, the mechanic’s, shop
I stared at him as he wrote on a pad
he looked up but didn’t stop

My mom asked him to supper one night
he wore clean clothes, was freshly shaved
I watched his every movement
wanting to see how he behaved.

He said he spends his life on the road
no job, no home, no family
working at odd jobs just to exist
living his life totally free.

Later, I watched him as I did homework,
an essay for English class,
The stranger glanced at me once or twice
over the rim of his drinking glass.

He asked if he could read my work
and I handed it to him with dread
and when he finished, he smiled at me;
told me he liked what he had read.

He said he was a traveling poet
roaming the country trying to find
inspiration for his soul and
stimulation for his mind.

I asked to hear some of his work
though I thought all poetry was dull
but when he spoke I was lifted up
as I listened to his chronicle.

He recited to me, almost til dawn
words creating a world that was real
his intricate rhyming took me away
my heart opened up, my head began to reel.

Soldiers and knights, maidens fair and foul
were paraded before me that night
his voice soothed my childish heart
his stories set my restless soul alight.

Each night he stayed, we sat together
he regaled me with poems of every kind
fascinated, I sat transfixed
at the words that came from his mind.

One day I awoke to find he had gone
a farewell note stuck under my door
like any performer, the drifter knew
to leave his audience wanting more.

He told me to always remember him
to find joy in the written word
to be happy, and kind and always
remember the stories that I heard.

Since then I have a love for words
for poetry with and without rhyme
I hear them in the drifter’s voice
remembered in that far off time.

To this day, I treasure the gift of poetry
as I write, I’ll always hold it dear
and I often reread that wonderful note
signed, poetically, the Balladeer.


**Yes, inspired by our own Balladeer!


© Copyright 2009 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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1 posted 2009-05-03 06:03 PM


This is absolutely beautiful!  He certainly is an inspirational poet.  May his surgery be successful, followed by full healing.

  Rae

Klassy Lassy
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2 posted 2009-05-03 06:25 PM


Inspired and special, just like our Balladeer.  A touch of love I know he will appreciate, as we have been touched by him.  So glad you posted this!  ~ Karen
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3 posted 2009-05-03 06:51 PM


much enjoyed this...hope Mike is healing and
will be up and about soon if not already!!

Oklahoma Rose
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4 posted 2009-05-04 08:10 AM


Awwww, this sounds just like our Balladeer. I can truly understand how he can affect someone like that. His poetry has sure stuck with me. He has always been my favorite poet here, since I joined Pip.
latearrival
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5 posted 2009-05-04 09:13 AM


Poet Devine, You are inspiring also. Mike will love this one. sincerely, latearrival

And to Mike we are all pulling for you.

Osprey
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6 posted 2009-05-04 12:17 PM


I enjoyed reading your poem; very entertaining. A bit like 'Shane', but a pen, paper and poems replacing a gun.
Balladeer
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7 posted 2009-05-04 08:59 PM


Ah, PdV, I loved this poem when you posted it (so many, many years ago) and I still love it. Thank you for bringing it back, my friend. I appreciate it
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8 posted 2009-05-05 10:58 AM


Wonderful poem, devine one! *S* (and the inspiration ain't bad, either. LOL)
Rex
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9 posted 2009-05-05 12:11 PM


Poet de Vine....

Very very nice and well done..enjoyed very much.

Regards.

Charisma
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10 posted 2009-05-05 04:15 PM


It's always a treat to read you dear Poet.
Thank you for sharing.


Theresia

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11 posted 2009-05-05 06:40 PM


Thanks for re-posting this for Balladeer ~ for those who have not read it before, are able to enjoy it now!!!

Methinks ye be a fine 'Balladeeress', DeVine One!

Oh, and this is definitely a I am saving it to my folder about poets and writing poetry! I read the poems in that file, often! They inspire me to write when I get into one of those blank page slumps!

Love & hugs to both you and Balladeer!


Linda


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