Open Poetry #44 |
Meet Me In Forever |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kind sir, praytell, where mightst I find "Forever" ~ then I shall forthwith meet you there! Oh, Bill, such a rhapsodically romantic poet, ye be! Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enjoyed your lovely romantic write, dear Bill. You explore the forever love sites and bring smiles. I would exclude behind the moon, unless you are an astronaut and know the place! Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ah, the dreams we dream: Romantic, ethereal, and wistful. I enjoyed the journey. ~K |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is an interesting picture of the big moon, and a great poem to go with it. Good job. Bobby |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A very beautiful, and romantic poem, Bill! I'll meet you in forever. In the forever is just my kind of place. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very beautiful prayer with elegant words, thank you for sharing this so romantic moment. regards yann |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
You are a shadow of the moon's great light and love |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
loved the last stanza... so beautiful...you are such a wonderful romantic! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Meet me in forever , Bill this was such a beautiful thought Hope |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is such a sweet tender poem Bill, A delight to read my friend, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Bill, a beautiful, soothing right as always. I love your poetry. Mark |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great pic! Bill you are the master of romance. Especially that second verse. Loved this! Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a beautiful write of romance... who could resist such entreaty? *S* Just lovely! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~*Sigh*~ This was so beautifully romantic penned, Meet me in forever, I'll be there! Theresia |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - I will wait for you there, in forever... Margherita - ah yes, but behind the moon is a romantic world waiting to be discovered... Klassy Lassy - I'm glad that you enjoyed this journey... Bobby - as always, thank you for your reply... Oklahoma Rose - I'm sure this forever is your kind of place... 2islander2 - you're most kind with your reply to this writing... inkedgoddess - your words touch me. For some reason I love the moon, especially when in romance... SEA - you also my dear, are a true romantic... HopeS - forever is a most beautiful place... Lindsay - my friend, I'm glad you liked this one... Marc-Andre - your words touch me, I'm glad my words you touch you... ethome - it's in there somewhere, and keeps on coming out... suthern - romance it is, in forever... Charisma - I'll be waiting there... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great write Bill...I think we all yearn for ever, especially if it's a beautiful as you see it.... j. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - thanks for coming by for a read... jwesley - appreciate your comments about this write, and thanks for the compliment... BC |
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Rose of Sharon Junior Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 19 |
Bill I wonder where forever ends, perhaps behind the moon. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
'Come to me, for I would whisper to you of desires deep, Ecstasy would be of pleasures to never end the night'. Lovely romantic writing Bill. There's just something deeply magical and sensuous about the moonlight. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rose of Sharon - I'm not sure where it ends, but it must be a good place, then again it may be behind the moon... Suncleaver - I love the moonlight, and the romance it can bring... BC |
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