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Open Poetry #44

forever in love

qtangel812
Junior Member

since 2009-05-02

Posts 10

0 posted 2009-05-03 09:53 AM

Sweet angel wanting to be heard

Your lover wants to be with you

Her heart will not let you go

She feels your presence yet ignores her heart

For she no longer wants to feel the pain

Not wanting to move on she refuses to accept her loss

My sweet angel reaching out to her dry your tears

Do not worry she is safe with you around

[This message has been edited by qtangel812 (05-04-2009 07:39 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2009-05-03 10:10 AM

"She feels you presence yet ignores her heart"

Do you mean your presence? If so, just click on the edit button (the second white one) and you can change it.

Welcome,
M

qtangel812
Junior Member

since 2009-05-02

Posts 10

2 posted 2009-05-04 07:42 PM

thnx for pointing that out
i didnt notice that lil mistake :]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-05-04 08:18 PM

"Not wanting to move on she refuses to accept her loss"

accepting takes time, and for some, it never happens...

a touching write

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-05-04 11:24 PM

qtangel812 - nice write, very touching...

BC

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2009-05-05 04:27 AM

I agree with the others, a very touching heartfelt write.

Eric

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