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the drift of cactus
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the drift of cactus |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the child side of the man of me, it was that realized about love stories that the only good ones have requirements for one of the lovers to be alone most of their love time at least either at their emptiest beginnings with an insatiable instinct to be filled so they search through their cactus pillows for dreams that can make their skin wet with the saliva sooth from another dessert or at the end of their heart lines when they look back through the winds and see only those distant memories of something pulled away from their souls and set adrift on the ocean of lonely it is then, when the story is written and the pen is the weeping of love blood that stains the sheets of unmade parchment and spills like melted mouths without kisses over the eyes of a voyeur with blinded eyes and the sound of love is but an echoed vapor ________________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you have such a word-imagination... Nicely expressed  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such deeply captivating imagery with profound meaning, dear D.! You could easily teach LOVE and POETRY ... with your mastery in both fields. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thanks babe ___________ ms mar, thanks to you special lady |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Ever so sensuously beautiful. Your words flow like a teasing touch. A |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Looking back through the winds, all the cherry blossoms lie in the weeds of the back yard or line the curbs, but the spindle down is a pink snow storm. You catch the drift expertly on the "cactus pillows!" ~KL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms alie-san, thanks babe _____________ ms KL, thanks lady friend...nice to see you again!! |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Loved this lonesome glance. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Hea' thanks for the eyes lady. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you soothe smoothe the prickly cactus for me to lay down on |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms inky, you have a way of keeping the sooth going. Thanks lady. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the only good ones have requirements for one of the lovers to be alone most of their love time at least And so you set the scene for hearts to twist, for mirrors to reflect, for tears to well at truth's telling... I love all of your work, D... but this is one of your best! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms suthern |
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