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Open Poetry #44

Ting Tumb Tatter

Burk28
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since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

0 posted 2009-01-10 10:27 PM

Ting tumb tatter, clatter dish and chatter.
Window woman yelling out,
Whatever is the matter?

Simple silly frilly dish,
From washboard came a bang,
A ting tumb tatter, clatter dish and chatter!

Oh my blather! That ting tumb tatter,
Was it a china dish that chattered,
from which came that clatter?

No, me no my, just common clatter,
Thank heavens for that ting tumb tatter,
For I never really liked that chatter.

So’s well, said window woman yelling out
I shall not blather and check my own dear chatter,
And keep them from that ting tumb tatter.
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Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2009-01-11 12:16 PM

very interesting and unique

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Burk28
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since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

2 posted 2009-01-11 01:47 AM

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2009-01-11 10:53 PM

Love the assonance journey. Very original and innovative.....good work!

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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4 posted 2009-01-11 11:06 PM

this has a musical resonance that I find intriguing...nicely done

Burk28
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since 2009-01-08

Posts 80
Michigan USA

5 posted 2009-01-12 09:04 AM

Thank you for your comments and taking the time to read.

Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self

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