Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Is Maturing |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones is maturing. He’s got the Adam’s apple and he’s starting in on the peach fuzz thing. He panics that he might lose his innocent looks. There’s nothing he can do about it. He feels helpless. He thinks it might be okay. He might have to shave. Mom tells him not to worry. He’s got to think. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I hate it when I lose my responses. Bobby, this is the most sad Bones poem that I have read. Thank you for sharing him and all your friends with us. xoxoxo Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, What responses are you talking about Hon? I've always responded to your posts--I think! If I missed on, it wasn't on purpose. It's not sad to mature. That's a good thing. Everyones having it done. Don't forget, I write scatter-shot, little Bones will probably be back. He could be back anytime. Love Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bobby, I agree that it is not sad to mature. It's sad that Bones panicked as he matured. That's what is sad. And the response was the first one I had written to this poem. I lost it when I hit submit. Love you, Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bobby, good thoughts, maturing needs some share, it is judicious and important... bravo. yann |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
It is in his heart that shall or rather may be young forever. Grat poem. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I think Bobby's outside is catching up with his inside. Linda |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, I understand now why you thought it was sad. As you know, of the two dear friends that were models for Bones, one died in a terrible accident on our El, and the other is now approaching retirement from driving a cab here in the city. He’s doing great, and lives up the street, and around the corner. Thank you for your concern for my friends and me. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Yes, maturing is very important, and can be very interesting. Perhaps I'll tell you more tales about it. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Poddarku, I'm pleased that you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for your very kind words. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, Yes, that's what happens when you get older. Pretty soon you'll be able to see right through me. Thanks for your interesting observation. Love Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he, Bones will make it through all of that and figure out how to keep on surviving despite those physical changes. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, Your right, that's exactly what happened. Bones was one of the lucky ones. There's a lot of lucky ones. Bobby |
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