Open Poetry #44 |
Slow Burn |
Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
With just her voice She ignited a slow burn Casual glances from pictures So many mysteries to learn To dive in and explore And for more than that, he yearned All that is missing in his life For all of her heat, he burned She radiates the glow Another head is turned He lays down in the fire Of a very slow burn |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wow! *S* It suddenly got very WARM in here... even though my employer keeps the AC cranked to icycle temps! *G* Some burns are worth than worth a few blisters. *G* I love this! *S* Wonderful write, my friend! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, CG! I echo suthern's "Wow!" In fact, that goes double for me! The lyrics "Burn baby, burn" ~ come to mind! ~ A smouldering piece of writing! EA |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I feel like I'm supposed to smoke a cigarette after reading this. I don't even smoke. Nice work. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I forgot to put this in my library first time around... not surprising since I forgot to breathe, too. *G* |
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