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viking_metal
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0 posted 2009-05-01 11:46 AM



She asked me why
I danced
like such a fool.

I told her
"Every once in a while,
just for a minute,
life is like the movies."


________________________________

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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suthern
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1 posted 2009-05-01 12:02 PM


I like this... it left me smiling. *S*
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2 posted 2009-05-01 01:19 PM


and then you both danced over the park benches,held hands and went back to your place for the 45 minutes!    

Boshii2

viking_metal
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3 posted 2009-05-01 02:23 PM


Suthern... Thank you.

Boshii... Wouldn't that have been nice? One girl will be great enough to do such things, eventually. :P
-P

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4 posted 2009-05-02 02:38 AM


I really, really like this.  Maybe because I dance like a fool all the time.  I am so darned uncordinated.  I went out with a guy once who took me to dinner and then said it was a musical and everyone was going to get up and dance and sing.  I was kind of disappointed when it didn't happen.

Love your titles as always - and your poems too.

Ala-hoon (I can't believe I signed that old nickname ~ grins)

viking_metal
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5 posted 2009-05-02 08:59 AM


Ala-hoon? I likez it. Thank you very much, mademoiselle. I appreciate the kind words. Perhaps someday I'll hunt you down and demand a dance.


-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2009-05-02 09:30 AM


Great title... following the music.
Even me

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-05-02 10:01 AM


Love it! I really dig it when a guy can let loose and have fun on the dance floor!

I hope you have lots of magical movie moments in your life!

:hug:
EA

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8 posted 2009-05-03 12:55 PM


every once in a while, it should be

always enjoy reading you!

viking_metal
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9 posted 2009-05-03 10:17 AM


ThisDiamond...Thank you. Always a pleasure.

Earth Angel, Earth Angel... Ha! If you're ever in MN we'll have to go dancing. :P (I've never gone dancing, I'm more of a dance-in-the-street-with-your-car-doors-open kinda guy.)

My dear, dear, dear SEA... Thank you very much. You never fail to bring up my spirits.


-Paul

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2009-05-03 12:56 PM


viking_metal - and indeed it is, nice write...

BC

viking_metal
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11 posted 2009-05-03 03:41 PM


Thank you much sir. I appreciate the kind words.


-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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