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Water strings (haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Water strings bend deep bare rocks elicit refrains echoed by the wind *** [This message has been edited by Margherita (01-12-2009 05:54 PM).] |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
I think this piece is a soft and wonderful renderinf of nature, it took me to that stream the vision well portrayed here, excellent five stars I say ***** Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I hear the echos. All the time.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
My dear, dear, Margherita, how nice to read your lovely thoughts again! You are so very special. Happy new year dear friend, I hope all is well with you and yours. Richy |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Earth Angel |
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light
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My dear Dolphina, you and your muse must surely be deva spirits of Mother Nature!   AT to you, EA to others lol | ||||
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Marheita, is this rain falling (water ?) or a spring or a fall of water...All the options make the poem mysterious but beautiful. have a nice day yann |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A lovely toast to life's rythmic flow. Great to read you again. [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-11-2009 02:14 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Poet friends, for your loving comments. Dear Yann, maybe the picture didn't show? I have put in another one, not perfectly fitting, but still it gives the idea. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kindof makes me want to go swimming...James |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I can hear it. Very nice! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, I've seen waterfalls like that in our Lands End State Forest here in Pennsylvania. Very nice picture and poem. Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a descriptively beautiful write to match a lovely pic...nicely done |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thats a place I would love to be right now , its been so hot today almost 40 Celsius degrees and the same again tomorrow Hope |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - beautiful words and graphic... BC |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*SIGHS*  this is beautiful |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
margherita, i have been away for awhile ...you have not lost your poetic touch ...you and your poetry are still as beautiful as ever. |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
Nice pic, and even nicer writing ... T.C |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
The life's best things are just the most simple one. This poem shows your signature thoughts... Great clever talks delay friendship! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a beautiful musical adaptation you have created here.....The pic and the words are excellent! Like a symphony..........Life is beautiful sometimes isn't it? Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, dear Poet friends, for the loving comments. You brought smiles. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most fine poetic and photographic imagery! sustained applause!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bruce, thank you, I always enjoy your comments very much! Love, Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So lovely, dear Margherita. Stunning pic to go with your wonderful words.  Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Helen, thank you! Where have you been all this time, missed you! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is so beautiful Margherita! Lovely Picture as well! ARCTIC WIND |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Margherita....perfectly matched words to picture...both art. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your replies are sweet gifts, dear Michael and dear Martie, I missed both of you. Hope you have come to stay for a while! Will be back in February, I am going to visit my daughter and grandsons Simon (4 1/2 and Milo, 1 year two months). They are growing fast and I don't want to miss the joy of being with them, witnessing their progress with a grateful heart. Love and hugs to you and to all of my Pip friends. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How absolutely lovely! *S* |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very well done! |
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