Open Poetry #44 |
wiggle foot holy with lime |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you were a school girl's wiggle foot in jeans pretending you had your listen turned on when someone's mouth was moving around you said you were always thinking of me and the possibilities that might occur if we went to elsewhere for the weekend and left our reasons outside on the railing where the racoons might steal them and ruin the excuses that were in our pockets but would I mind you being nude that way when your heart was mostly exposed and there was nothing else between us to keep us from being what I had prayed for ___________ daark |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
to keep us from being what I had prayed for... that ending struck me, Dark. Unanswered prayers are the best prayers indeed. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks CG |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you said you were always thinking of me and the possibilities that might occur if we went to elsewhere for the weekend As someone always thinking possibilities, I love these lines! *S* Wonderful write! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thanks babe!! |
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