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Little Sums |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Little Sums Little thoughts Little memories Little likes Look like me Small entices Small insights and Small romances Those enhanced and Black and white and Noon and night and Second chances in Small romances This could be A little song A bring along A song that could And were it such It would be much More to me Than you. © krj 10 January 2009 " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This IS a delightful little song, dear Karilea! A new rhythm for you, with great impact! Love, Margherita  |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
A wonderful and delightful read sunshine, i liked this piece very much, thank you for sharing this with us. Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"It would be much More to me Than you." ah...a poem after mine own heart...  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-11-2009 09:19 AM).] |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh, I really like this, Sunshine. Hope you are doing okay. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
When I read this, I heard (metaphorically) a little bird trilling. Absolutely delightful, Karilea. What a beautiful end to a lovely day - well, my day isn't over yet, but the daytime part of it nearly is. Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Solar Orb of radiant Light, You make me smile with sheer delight. Your little sums make up a whole, That touches both my heart and soul. ~ A precious poem from a precious poetess! Giving you a big, warm hug 'n smiley face, Linda   P.S. Thank you for stirring up 'sum' of my own. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This sounds like a little soul song, the kind that keeps us strong and movin' on. kudos Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you for singing this delightful song for us. I am loving it. Alison PS - Didn't you mention something about singing a duet once? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It might be just as much to the one listening or reading and receiving. This is such a wonderfully put together list poem......Little sums add up to a lot..... Take care Karilea youse is a good gal! Eric |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
Well I'm hoping that it meant as much to me as it does to you. Thank you Sunshine for sharing. Claira x |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This one sure has rhythm to me!!! Hugs, Neeraja |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
well to sum it all up, I have to agree with everyone else here..I love it The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Little? Hardly. It reads big to me. *s |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Kewl -- it sounds so much like a Pantoum, without being one. Me like dat, and the message, personal but timelessly universal. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow...look at the friends who came to see a little nothing poem; one of those little rhymie thingies that sometimes tickle the brain and heart and... thank you. I thought this would get a goose-egg...it's too simple, too easy, too cutsie? Well, maybe not cutsie...but I really did not expect this wonderful response. I love our PiP people... I love helping us grow...[yep, I've invited another person to join our throngs...clear out the extra room, Ron! ]Thank you! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Small lines, great impact. *S* I thoroughly enjoyed! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sissie...what luck to find, this little ray of sun-Sunshine! |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Sunshine - Just when I was comfortably settling in for a post yuletide depression, you had to go and write this poetic upliftment. I can see the light and hear your sunshine song. I feel a lot better now. Thanks. Namyh |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - little sums with a whole lot of meaning. Nice write... BC |
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