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Open Poetry #44

dear reader--need your thoughts!

zeedub
New Member

since 2009-04-30

Posts 1

0 posted 2009-04-30 06:15 PM

i need to know if this is good or not. i have a open mike tonight and its my first one... so help?
dear reader my life is no theater
no box office hit
i dont fit like a brick
and im not ready to submit
cuz im a danger to society
a menace of variety

hey reader you might as well forget
cuz im not here to fit
you might as well admit
i dont just go into that pit
the hopeless and unfit
for even if i have no skill
i wont take those pills that make people ill
to you consumerist thrills

so reader its not about being inferior
nor thinking im superior
just being my way
cuz we all have something to say

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

1 posted 2009-04-30 06:26 PM

Uh, I guess,
Is this a rap song?
Open mic for Poetry?

Good luck, Let us know how it goes.

Tracey.

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