»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #44
»
Wubwigwo
| Open Poetry #44 |
|
Wubwigwo |
|
|
Michael2014 New Member
since 2009-04-30
Posts 2Canaada |
Another one i'm looking for comments on. anything i should change? I find myself in an ocean of the most beautiful colour of blue. with every breath taken, a rush of water fills my lungs, I stop. I'm shook, shaken, free but stuck in the depth of this. I know, I know, I know, I have the freedom my world desires, but I don't ever want to be free from where i'm stuck. |
||
| © Copyright 2009 Michael Groat - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
SeraphimBroken Member
since 2009-03-09
Posts 74USA |
hmmmm. very nice  perhaps your not stuck... just sinking. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
