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hinge of leather sighways |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there were no edges at our boundaries like picket fences on a fantasy most of the liquid could get through and leave wet paint patterns on our caution you dressed for the occasion usually with your hem short enough for me to imagine it wasn't there at all when you exited the entrances to the things you wanted us to do and found me willing enough to experiment with my prior experiences all over again since you wanted to know how long the endings were and about those saliva on gravel sinsations between as we consummated our musical introductions ______________ daark (wishbone whiskey) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...the whole thing was so good, but this line caught my attention: "and leave wet paint patterns on our caution" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks amigo!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you dressed for the occasion usually with your hem short enough for me to imagine it wasn't there at all when you exited From flirt to finale... fantastic! *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I have read this three times now and each time I realize that I am hooked on how you use words. You are the master of word play and word usage. It's beautiful to see and read. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thank you ____________ thanks so much ali-san |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
a rare delicacy that i will definitely return to. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kindred..thanks so much |
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