"Summer's Mistakes" (the real one this time...)

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Open Poetry #44

"Summer's Mistakes" (the real one this time...)

Arius Miura de Galdri
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since 2007-07-04

Posts 90
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2009-04-29 11:25 PM

The last time I posted a poem called "Summer's Mistakes" I posted the wrong poem ("For Those Who Follow After") instead.

So, here is "Summer's Mistakes" for real this time.

"Summer's Mistakes"

The changing seasons carry with them summer's past mistakes
Those days of old I'd rather not relive
And mem'ries tear upon my fragile heart until it breaks
My eyes, I fear, have yet more tears to give

An old adage says Time heals all, if only that were true
Then just perhaps my broken soul would mend
But changing bleeding wounds to scars is all that Time can do
And scars are borne until the bitter end

March 18, 2009

AMdG

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-04-30 11:45 AM

beautifully expressed, a very enjoyable read.Time heals or not ?

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2009-05-01 06:34 PM

Nice writing...James

WTBAKELAR

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since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

3 posted 2009-05-01 06:43 PM

Scars can be a vivid reminder of the lessons we have learned.
And if you learn from your mistakes, then, hopefully, in time, you will grow to respect them for what they are.

Just be carefull not to get to many of them.

Tracey.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2009-05-01 07:22 PM

I kiss scars. (I actually do.)

You are an intriguing poet. (And love the pic!)

Happy Beltane, lovie! And thank you for this treat of a read.

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